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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Beyond Body: Fasting
Svelte: At Home Fitness20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fasting”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “At Home Fitness”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Personalized Fasting Plan”
Has a subtitle
“Home of MetaBoost / One & Done”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fasting”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “home”.
First paragraph is 352 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 69 characters.
2,607 characters.
Enough substance
2,029 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.32 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.40 average.
814 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
248 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “In this version we introduced bug fixes and overall improved quality”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance enhancements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
7 languages.
175 MB.
Reasonable download size
135 MB.