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Beyond Body: Fasting
High Diet: Protein & MuscleHigh Diet: Protein & Muscle
Lose Weight & Build Body
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fasting”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Protein & Muscle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Personalized Fasting Plan”
Has a subtitle
“Lose Weight & Build Body”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fasting”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 352 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 264 characters.
2,607 characters.
Enough substance
2,988 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.32 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.32 average.
814 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
504 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “In this version we introduced bug fixes and overall improved quality”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor Bug Fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
175 MB.
Reasonable download size
127 MB.