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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Save Mart Delivery & Pick Up
Food 4 Less PAQ, IncSave Mart Delivery & Pick Up
Shop groceries. Fast & fresh.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shop groceries. Fast & fresh.”
Has a subtitle
“PAQ, Inc.”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “paq”, “inc”.
First paragraph is 372 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 111 characters.
1,695 characters.
Enough substance
111 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.41 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
39 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and improvements”
3 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
288 MB.
Reasonable download size
283 MB.