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TogetherIV
buggg: make plans with friendsbuggg: make plans with friends
See when friends are free
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “make plans with friends”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Your Real-Time IV Community”
Has a subtitle
“See when friends are free”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “friends”.
First paragraph is 213 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 33 characters.
1,700 characters.
Enough substance
1,306 characters.
15 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.36 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
11 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
21 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 238 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 43 days ago.
Generic notes: “Access to all the features for a limited time and minor bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fix last active message to just show 'Offline" instead”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
46 MB.
Reasonable download size
41 MB.