Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SUN: Origin
Loren WOM11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Origin”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“WEBZEN Licensed, Classic MMO”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 219 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 43 characters.
1,958 characters.
Enough substance
1,225 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.93 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.40 average.
14 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
160 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
417 characters of release notes.
15 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
1013 MB.
Reasonable download size
200 MB.