Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SUN: Origin
Abyss Hunters11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Origin”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“WEBZEN Licensed, Classic MMO”
Has a subtitle
“Classic pixel idle RPG”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 219 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 365 characters.
1,958 characters.
Enough substance
2,026 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.93 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
14 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
191 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 170 days ago.
160 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
870 characters of release notes.
15 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
1013 MB.
Reasonable download size
275 MB.