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Star Battle: Grid Logic Puzzle
Star Battle - Two Not Touch30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Grid Logic Puzzle”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Two Not Touch”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Relaxing logic star puzzles”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “star”.
First paragraph is 36 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 241 characters.
1,237 characters.
Enough substance
899 characters.
13 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.63 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.00 average.
64 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 45 days ago.
184 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
213 characters of release notes.
11 languages.
Localised listing
44 languages.
144 MB.
Reasonable download size
2 MB.