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Scrolless - Save Your Vision
Eye Exercise - OneEye28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Save Your Vision”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “OneEye”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Smart Relief From Screens”
Has a subtitle
“Eyesight Trainer”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 303 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 110 characters.
3,315 characters.
Enough substance
1,003 characters.
3 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 26 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “• Performance improvements • Bug fixes • Localisation”
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
48 MB.
Reasonable download size
42 MB.