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Scrolless - Save Your Vision
VisionBreak: Eye Rest Timer28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Save Your Vision”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Eye Rest Timer”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Smart Relief From Screens”
Has a subtitle
“20-20-20 Eye Break Timer”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “eye”, “timer”.
First paragraph is 303 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 268 characters.
3,315 characters.
Enough substance
917 characters.
3 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
155 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
48 MB.
Reasonable download size
20 MB.