Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Your Number Mind Games”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Brain Training Puzzle Game”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 128 characters.
3,038 characters.
Enough substance
1,819 characters.
42 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 277 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 676 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed Game Center leaderboards and achievements, and other minor fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Unlock exciting new achievements as you conquer puzzles and level up…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
7 MB.
Reasonable download size
26 MB.