Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Classic No Ads”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Brain Training Puzzle Game”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 24 characters.
3,038 characters.
Enough substance
1,025 characters.
42 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
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Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 277 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 49 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed Game Center leaderboards and achievements, and other minor fixes”
Release notes say something
632 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
7 MB.
Reasonable download size
4 MB.