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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Sudoku”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Brain Training Puzzle Game”
Has a subtitle
“Daily Puzzles. Pure Focus.”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 112 characters.
3,038 characters.
Enough substance
1,893 characters.
42 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.40 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 277 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 105 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed Game Center leaderboards and achievements, and other minor fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “+ Bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
7 MB.
Reasonable download size
125 MB.