Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “No Ads · Brain Puzzle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Brain Training Puzzle Game”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 79 characters.
3,038 characters.
Enough substance
1,113 characters.
42 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 277 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed Game Center leaderboards and achievements, and other minor fixes”
Release notes say something
170 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
9 languages.
7 MB.
Reasonable download size
4 MB.