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Mi Club Food City
Fry's17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
5/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Coupons, Shopping & More”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 63 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 232 characters.
956 characters.
Enough substance
2,184 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.20 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
20 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
116,924 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “Feature enhancements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
444 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
65 MB.
Reasonable download size
244 MB.