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Christian Life Journal
Ridgecrest Baptist22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Every journal. One place.”
Has a subtitle
“Lifestyle”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “journal”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 25 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 104 characters.
1,792 characters.
Enough substance
169 characters.
2 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 67 days ago.
996 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes, some UI improvements, and continuing to add new featu…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
27 MB.
Reasonable download size
50 MB.