Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
A ONE Notes
Penumi: Notes & Sketches11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Notes & Sketches”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Note taking & whiteboard app”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 155 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 91 characters.
155 characters.
Enough substance
1,192 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
0/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
0/10 iPhone screenshots.
No screenshots.
Portrait panels up front
No screenshots.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 70 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
Generic notes: “- minor bugfix - minor UI update”
Release notes say something
298 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
9 languages.
35 MB.
Reasonable download size
16 MB.