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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Carom 3C: Billiards & Notes
CaromerongCarom 3C: Billiards & Notes
Learn, note, save carom shots
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Billiards & Notes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Learn, note, save carom shots”
Has a subtitle
“App for Carom 3C billiard game”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “carom”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 125 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 240 characters.
1,612 characters.
Enough substance
529 characters.
11 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 786 days ago.
775 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved physics engine. Fixed bugs in practice mode.”
6 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
23 MB.