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Carom 3C: Billiards & Notes
3C ScoreCarom 3C: Billiards & Notes
Learn, note, save carom shots
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Billiards & Notes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Learn, note, save carom shots”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “carom”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 125 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 74 characters.
1,612 characters.
Enough substance
2,798 characters.
11 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
775 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
566 characters of release notes.
6 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
21 MB.