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Holy Bible You Version
Privacy.com: Virtual Cards22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Virtual Cards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Offline KJV NIV Study & Recap”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 79 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 280 characters.
656 characters.
Enough substance
2,116 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
2.25 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,155 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 51 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix bug”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bugfixes and improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
71 MB.
Reasonable download size
55 MB.