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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Calorie Tracker: CalNote
Weight Loss Diet Plan: DietLab24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “CalNote”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “DietLab”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
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Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 33 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 177 characters.
1,634 characters.
Enough substance
2,870 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.67 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
15 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
185 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 67 days ago.
150 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Stability improvements and bug fixes”
8 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
133 MB.
Reasonable download size
87 MB.