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NightClub Simulator
LinkedIn: Community & NetworkLinkedIn: Community & Network
Find Jobs, Insights and News
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Community & Network”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Step inside a living nightclub”
Has a subtitle
“Find Jobs, Insights and News”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “nightclub”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 188 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 315 characters.
2,430 characters.
Enough substance
3,733 characters.
0 bullet lines, 37 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
22 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
6,791 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
644,545 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed bugs and improved game stability”
Release notes say something
159 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
35 languages.
756 MB.
Reasonable download size
425 MB.