Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
AIVO Awaken
睡眠精灵-专业白噪音助眠梦话录音睡眠质量监测11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “专业白噪音助眠梦话录音睡眠质量监测”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Breathe. Listen. Touch. See.”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 32 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 38 characters.
784 characters.
Enough substance
916 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 154 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1023 days ago.
173 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “修复已知bug，界面优化，欢迎体验~”
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
73 MB.
Reasonable download size
66 MB.