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Pause by TzYi
Habit: Grab It13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Grab It”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Mindful pauses for the web”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 36 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 138 characters.
625 characters.
Enough substance
1,179 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 268 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 179 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- New app name - Bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
1 MB.
Reasonable download size
8 MB.