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Soso: Tween Period Tracker
My period calendar Pinkllama26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Tween Period Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Period tracker for teens”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “period”.
First paragraph is 178 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 27 characters.
3,359 characters.
Enough substance
3,644 characters.
27 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
571 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19,090 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 188 days ago.
500 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes. Stay healthy & happy!”
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
74 MB.
Reasonable download size
138 MB.