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Soso: Tween Period Tracker
Luna Period Tracker For Teens26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Tween Period Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 178 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 160 characters.
3,359 characters.
Enough substance
1,099 characters.
27 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
571 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,149 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
500 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed an issue so the password screen now shows up again.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
74 MB.
Reasonable download size
68 MB.