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My Night Notes
Shadow Work & CBT: Hollowlight14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hollowlight”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 103 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 116 characters.
1,217 characters.
Enough substance
1,164 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.18 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 222 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 402 days ago.
69 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “stability improvements, bug fixes and performance increases.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
18 MB.
Reasonable download size
55 MB.