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Star Battle: Logic Puzzles
Star Puzzle GameStar Battle: Logic Puzzles
Bas Adriaan van den Berg
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Logic Puzzles”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“star puzzle game - logic game”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “star”, “puzzle”, “game”.
First paragraph is 212 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 35 characters.
1,397 characters.
Enough substance
408 characters.
6 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.89 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.25 average.
9 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 27 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 171 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improvements and bugfixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “+ Update to the latest API!”
14 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
24 MB.
Reasonable download size
123 MB.