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Mirror - Light, Camera, Zoom
Pocket makeup mirror, ad-free
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “iPhone mirror App”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Light, Camera, Zoom”.
Contains filler: “iphone”, “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“See yourself, inside and out”
Has a subtitle
“Pocket makeup mirror, ad-free”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “mirror”.
First paragraph is 31 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 150 characters.
1,512 characters.
Enough substance
1,172 characters.
12 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
422 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
110 characters of release notes.
7 languages.
Localised listing
15 languages.
263 MB.
Reasonable download size
23 MB.