Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Let It Rain:Cloud Bucks
Fishing Rally: Catch Quest23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Cloud Bucks”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Catch Quest”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Casual”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
6/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 64 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 217 characters.
772 characters.
Enough substance
769 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.70 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.03 average.
3,041 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
70 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 278 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fix bug”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “more fish.”
9 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
277 MB.
Reasonable download size
337 MB.