Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Mirror - Light, Camera, Zoom
Mirror: Makeup and Beauty CamMirror - Light, Camera, Zoom
Pocket makeup mirror, ad-free
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Light, Camera, Zoom”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Makeup and Beauty Cam”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pocket makeup mirror, ad-free”
Has a subtitle
“True Mirror App For Makeup”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “mirror”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “mirror”, “makeup”.
First paragraph is 150 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 47 characters.
1,172 characters.
Enough substance
1,242 characters.
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.38 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 593 days ago.
110 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “· Minor bugs fixed. · Spanish Localization added.”
15 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
23 MB.
Reasonable download size
4 MB.