Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
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Medieval Fantasy RPG: PvP 1v1
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Backpack Master”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hero Battles”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Medieval Fantasy RPG: PvP 1v1”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 60 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 211 characters.
1,780 characters.
Enough substance
1,955 characters.
10 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.96 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.71 average.
1,668 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5,950 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
458 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
319 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
32 languages.
392 MB.
Reasonable download size
522 MB.