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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Epic Idle War: Backpack Master
Backpack Rush30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Backpack Master”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Pack Smart, Battle Hard!”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 60 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 74 characters.
1,780 characters.
Enough substance
1,893 characters.
10 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.96 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
1,668 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,079 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
458 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Update, Organize, and Conquer! - Performance improvements.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
16 languages.
392 MB.
Reasonable download size
222 MB.