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MemoVault: Time-Locked Memos12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Time-Locked Memos”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Daily Devotional & Prayer”
Has a subtitle
“Time Capsule & Future Letters”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “time”.
First paragraph is 141 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 237 characters.
2,287 characters.
Enough substance
1,693 characters.
17 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
5 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 164 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 13 days ago.
1776 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and some minor UI improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
8 MB.
Reasonable download size
6 MB.