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Fujifilm Kiosk Photo Transfer
Snapfish: Photos Cards & Books29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Photos Cards & Books”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Order photo prints & gifts”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “photo”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 195 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 605 characters.
1,394 characters.
Enough substance
3,855 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.53 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
47 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
46,220 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1167 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Various bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
360 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
4 languages.
59 MB.
Reasonable download size
271 MB.