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27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Interactive Romance”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Interactive Stories”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Romance stories with choices.”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “romance”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 89 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 176 characters.
2,515 characters.
Enough substance
3,858 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 24 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and stability improvements.”
Release notes say something
70 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
33 MB.
Reasonable download size
48 MB.