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Package Tracker - TrackPack
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Parcel and Delivery Tracking
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “TrackPack”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Parcel and Delivery Tracking”
Has a subtitle
“DHL,USPS,UPS,FedEx,OnTrack”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 228 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 39 characters.
2,262 characters.
Enough substance
894 characters.
9 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
3.89 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
700 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11,593 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 225 days ago.
159 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
10 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
10 MB.