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Package Tracker - TrackPack
Parcel Monitor Track27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “TrackPack”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Track orders from 1,000+ shops”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “track”.
First paragraph is 228 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
2,262 characters.
Enough substance
2,013 characters.
9 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.89 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.52 average.
700 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
375 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 108 days ago.
159 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
177 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
21 MB.
Reasonable download size
58 MB.