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HermesPilot - For Hermes Users
Atomic HermesHermesPilot - For Hermes Users
Tasks, sessions, save tokens
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “For Hermes Users”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Tasks, sessions, save tokens”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 485 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 59 characters.
646 characters.
Enough substance
1,950 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.50 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.33 average.
24 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 113 days ago.
96 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “• Bug fixes and performance improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
57 MB.
Reasonable download size
75 MB.