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Tai Chi Walking : GentleFitTai Chi Walking : GentleFit
Qigong & Tai Chi For Beginners
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “GentleFit”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Daily guided workout plans”
Has a subtitle
“Qigong & Tai Chi For Beginners”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “tai”, “chi”.
First paragraph is 222 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
1,867 characters.
Enough substance
2,414 characters.
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
6,116 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,446 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
319 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “This release will improve app performance and bug fixes.”
13 languages.
Localised listing
6 languages.
118 MB.
Reasonable download size
180 MB.