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NovelMist - Novels & Stories
SnackFic - Stories & Novels28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Novels & Stories”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories & Novels”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Top Novels & Romance Stories”
Has a subtitle
“Romance & Fantasy Story”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “novels”, “stories”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “story”.
First paragraph is 543 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
3,547 characters.
Enough substance
2,147 characters.
3 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.18 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.17 average.
5,445 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,707 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Fixed known issues and optimized reading experience”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed known issues and optimized reading experience”
14 languages.
Localised listing
14 languages.
91 MB.
Reasonable download size
90 MB.