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Pastimes: Recall What You Did
ReveriePastimes: Recall What You Did
Remember the things you forget
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Recall What You Did”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Remember the things you forget”
Has a subtitle
“The Creative Fashion Hub”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 118 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 18 characters.
1,805 characters.
Enough substance
631 characters.
8 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
59 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 37 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 942 days ago.
499 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- revert UX”
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
5 MB.
Reasonable download size
72 MB.