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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
The Walk: Fitness Tracker Game
Hops - Journey of Tree Spirit30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fitness Tracker Game”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Journey of Tree Spirit”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 152 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 82 characters.
3,079 characters.
Enough substance
2,253 characters.
3 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
21 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
iPhone only, nothing to add.
4.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.46 average.
790 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
200 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 850 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 381 days ago.
85 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
140 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
302 MB.
Reasonable download size
101 MB.