Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Arkanoid: Brick Breaker Arcade
Retro Block Smash Ball Bounce
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Brick Breaker Arcade”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “The Invaders!”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Retro Block Smash Ball Bounce”
Has a subtitle
“Space Invaders style game”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “invaders”.
First paragraph is 120 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
1,016 characters.
Enough substance
475 characters.
12 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
2 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.36 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
152 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1003 days ago.
238 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “User Interface optimization for latest device models.”
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
20 MB.
Reasonable download size
204 MB.