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Toniva: Personal Color
HEADRIX – Eyewear made for you22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Personal Color”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Eyewear made for you”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Find colors that suit you”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “colors”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 69 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 80 characters.
1,175 characters.
Enough substance
3,381 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 38 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 245 days ago.
464 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “New models added, minor bugs fixed”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
22 MB.
Reasonable download size
348 MB.