Two listings. One rope.
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27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Guided Meditation”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Happiness Trap”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 93 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 148 characters.
3,484 characters.
Enough substance
1,728 characters.
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.21 average.
6,167 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
154 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 842 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1017 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixing critical bugs.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and UI enhancements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
622 MB.
Reasonable download size
224 MB.