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FreshCo:Grocery Deals & Flyers
Plan trips, earn Scene+ points
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Grocery Deals & Flyers”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Plan trips, earn Scene+ points”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 101 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
1,787 characters.
Enough substance
2,024 characters.
10 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
1.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
17 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 31 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 21 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixes to improve overall app stability.”
Release notes say something
464 characters of release notes.
0 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
133 MB.
Reasonable download size
128 MB.