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Redpoint: Bouldering, Climbing
#1 Climbing Tracker for Watch
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Life Climbing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Bouldering, Climbing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Your Worldwide Climbing Guide”
Has a subtitle
“#1 Climbing Tracker for Watch”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “climbing”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “climbing”.
First paragraph is 259 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 146 characters.
2,112 characters.
Enough substance
2,045 characters.
4 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.45 average.
47 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
565 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 387 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 120 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Fixed issue with opening hours in gyms”
Release notes say something
449 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
150 MB.
Reasonable download size
94 MB.