Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Forge of Empires: Build a City
Bit City: Building Evolution30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Build a City”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Building Evolution”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
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Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 264 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 425 characters.
1,587 characters.
Enough substance
425 characters.
6 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
168,173 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,483 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 262 days ago.
252 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes”
21 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
472 MB.
Reasonable download size
288 MB.