Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Forge of Empires: Build a City
City Island 3: Building Sim30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Build a City”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Building Sim”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 264 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 395 characters.
1,587 characters.
Enough substance
2,601 characters.
6 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
22 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
168,173 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,136 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 182 days ago.
252 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
21 languages.
Localised listing
22 languages.
472 MB.
Reasonable download size
178 MB.