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Pedometer++
Steps - Activity Tracker11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Activity Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Count Steps, Track Walks/Runs”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 152 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 85 characters.
3,117 characters.
Enough substance
1,440 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
182,880 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
134,123 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes minor bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
210 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
123 MB.
Reasonable download size
58 MB.